tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post5389291795821565804..comments2023-03-27T09:45:31.174-05:00Comments on One Block: Not a SuccubusMatt Merritthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02731741347561501172noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-1294694638716833332011-03-27T22:45:11.192-05:002011-03-27T22:45:11.192-05:00@John: Thanks! I'm glad you thought it worked....@John: Thanks! I'm glad you thought it worked.<br /><br />@AidanF: Glad the emotions came through. Thanks for reading!Matt Merritthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02731741347561501172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-65556638541961454712011-03-27T12:03:26.475-05:002011-03-27T12:03:26.475-05:00Great dialogue, I like how nonchalant Chet is abou...Great dialogue, I like how nonchalant Chet is about the whole situation and how stressed Jason becomes.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-1458648767046477262011-03-27T02:15:47.788-05:002011-03-27T02:15:47.788-05:00Ha, I like this, good flow, good dialogue, good en...Ha, I like this, good flow, good dialogue, good ending. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-2728688174354192872011-03-25T23:46:34.948-05:002011-03-25T23:46:34.948-05:00@laradunning: Glad you liked it! It was longer at ...@laradunning: Glad you liked it! It was longer at first, included some actual action at the scene, but I just had waaaay more fun with the roommates bickering, so I axed the rest.<br /><br />@Raven: Yeah, I had it as strigoi first, then did a quick search, and a couple folks said the feminine form was "strigoaica". I must admit, I'm no expert on it.Matt Merritthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02731741347561501172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-52699219037595292182011-03-25T19:16:02.722-05:002011-03-25T19:16:02.722-05:00The casual hunter is awesome. Not looking up from ...The casual hunter is awesome. Not looking up from the game to give advice. Though I've always seen it as strigoi o,.,o Cool tale.Raven Corinn Carlukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06014248975870886289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-80107624518251082332011-03-25T19:02:22.751-05:002011-03-25T19:02:22.751-05:00Giggles from my desk....great dialogue. The end wa...Giggles from my desk....great dialogue. The end was a real kicker. Fun story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-2223194195984087762011-03-25T15:53:07.035-05:002011-03-25T15:53:07.035-05:00@Steve&Joely: Thanks! Definitely a dialogue pi...@Steve&Joely: Thanks! Definitely a dialogue piece. I wonder if a little more description would help the pace a little.<br /><br />@John: Never saw that one before, but I'm going to hunt it down.<br /><br />@Tate: Chet's a bit of a d-bag, eh?Matt Merritthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02731741347561501172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-52505638609295696542011-03-25T09:05:17.961-05:002011-03-25T09:05:17.961-05:00Lol. I loved the line "You should have killed...Lol. I loved the line "You should have killed her, dude." Like it was an errand he forgot to do.<br /><br />Brilliant.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16518183823230864763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-65306235161177685632011-03-25T08:59:11.000-05:002011-03-25T08:59:11.000-05:00The Darkstalkers cartoon had one of my all-time fa...The Darkstalkers cartoon had one of my all-time favorite miscommunications:<br /><br />"She's a succubus."<br />"She sure does."<br /><br />Any chance you ever saw that? Felt relevant. Regardless, I enjoyed their succubi babble.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-54961910545031693322011-03-25T08:49:25.125-05:002011-03-25T08:49:25.125-05:00I love this - brilliant dialogue and very entertai...I love this - brilliant dialogue and very entertaining.Joely Blackhttp://amnar.org.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-85928800606067046922011-03-25T06:46:37.338-05:002011-03-25T06:46:37.338-05:00Great dialigue bouncing between these two guys, Ch...Great dialigue bouncing between these two guys, Chet really knows his stuff when it comes to the nasty visitors too.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.com