tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post7372481654786338458..comments2023-03-27T09:45:31.174-05:00Comments on One Block: Zombie Luv Flash Fic Contest: Something Not HungerMatt Merritthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02731741347561501172noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-18520530162638073262010-07-12T01:01:15.435-05:002010-07-12T01:01:15.435-05:00;-);-)Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-28483089030198644802010-07-10T22:15:30.834-05:002010-07-10T22:15:30.834-05:00Excellent job with the ZombieLuv. I love that they...Excellent job with the ZombieLuv. I love that they fall in love at the altar sharing a bishop!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-60161946424958266462010-07-09T06:13:26.584-05:002010-07-09T06:13:26.584-05:00Gruesome yet romantic...hard to pull off both at t...Gruesome yet romantic...hard to pull off both at the same time!Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-86063071152816463552010-07-07T14:19:48.920-05:002010-07-07T14:19:48.920-05:00Great stuff - some very gruesome chunks in there m...Great stuff - some very gruesome chunks in there mixed in nicely with the religious imagery.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-50001315029306468172010-07-07T06:49:40.084-05:002010-07-07T06:49:40.084-05:00Wow, Matt, that just BLEW me away! What a story. L...Wow, Matt, that just BLEW me away! What a story. Loved this:<br /><br />He looked to the front of the church, which was still undefiled. He saw the bishop kneeling before the altar, hands folded, eyes raised to the crucifix. She stepped aside, and he approached. “Conserva me ab inferno!” Save me from hell! the bishop cried.<br /><br />He tore out his throat.<br /><br />Definitely a big contender in the zombie luv contest. This was violent and sexy as hell. Gooooooood stuff!Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-79286718860289392812010-07-07T00:19:26.350-05:002010-07-07T00:19:26.350-05:00Great graphic descriptions & good story tellin...Great graphic descriptions & good story telling. Only one bit of constructive criticism - be careful using the same word or phrase more than once or twice. It's something I have to watch in my own writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-25537304978826980842010-07-05T12:51:47.465-05:002010-07-05T12:51:47.465-05:00Thanks everyone! John - The prayer is psalm 43, bu...Thanks everyone! John - The prayer is psalm 43, but I changed "deceitful man" to "deceitful dead" (although I'm not positive about my Latin, so I hope I didn't butcher it!).Matt Merritthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02731741347561501172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-36972189734199810802010-07-05T09:57:05.698-05:002010-07-05T09:57:05.698-05:00This is one nasty meal.
Never heard the phrase &q...This is one nasty meal.<br /><br />Never heard the phrase "deceitful dead" before. Whether old religion or new from you, that is a neat one.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-67943163113730648292010-07-04T12:46:28.851-05:002010-07-04T12:46:28.851-05:00Gruesome fantasy. I like it.Gruesome fantasy. I like it.Donald Conradhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11299995538611948494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-89527306154160613202010-07-04T11:46:47.093-05:002010-07-04T11:46:47.093-05:00Wow, great writing. And the motorcycle helmet was ...Wow, great writing. And the motorcycle helmet was pure genius.<br /><br />The zombie king and his fiery queen. Brilliant image. Excellent!<br /><br />Good luck in the contest!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-41012771327745494352010-07-04T01:28:06.891-05:002010-07-04T01:28:06.891-05:00Thanks for the great comments! I usually lean on d...Thanks for the great comments! I usually lean on dialogue in my stories, so this one was a real challenge.Matt Merritthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02731741347561501172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-51573670491395959182010-07-03T14:38:13.624-05:002010-07-03T14:38:13.624-05:00Brilliant! You had me hooked from the first senten...Brilliant! You had me hooked from the first sentence. Bravo!Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361651251233078437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-1591461581441966052010-07-03T09:59:48.530-05:002010-07-03T09:59:48.530-05:00You're on! :DYou're on! :DMarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07303695124956391293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4307239433508983657.post-76140102463254581832010-07-03T09:32:29.683-05:002010-07-03T09:32:29.683-05:00Very cool! Great descriptions throughout. The pict...Very cool! Great descriptions throughout. The picture right at the beginning of their nails and fingertips stripped off on the wall showed right away that this was going to be a wicked one. Well done!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.com